Floating (sonnet with Riley couplet)
Floating (sonnet with Riley couplet)Leny Roovers21-03-03As blood is sent from chambers into veins,release of pressure fades in dreams afloat;the anchors lift as tiny sailboats reignon misty lakes;...
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very nicely put. I can relate to that.love floating on the ocean waves,with the tune of < I am floating >,floating through my mind.
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I like it, BUT what is a Riley Couplet??? It looks like a Heroic except the last line isn't true IP. Is this Old Mother Riley's variation?
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thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts, Sally, glad you enjoyed. Leny
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Hello T, glad you like it. It is in essence a Shakespearean, but with a special kind of couplet, heroic in rhyme, the little chompy? parts it consists of, were in an example by a fellow poetess...this...
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Well I read it as yo-u la/ugh, I-li-st/en; a/nd I- w/ant t-o pl/ay.This makes it, iamb, anapest, an anpimacer and then another iamb
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There are few things more relaxing than floating in a pool, buoyed by the water; it is a lovely sensation. Unless you are in same pool with someone who thinks you need to be splashed and dunked etc...
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Teagan, I don't understand yourway of marking stressed and unstressed... ...I'm still no adept, in that...I always use capped and uncapped...please explain?
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It is indeed! I love being in the water, started swimming again, with a friend from work, one night a week and we have lots of fun! Glad you liked my sonnet, Etain.
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